Hi is this sentence correct?
A geeky college kid making his way through the zombie apocalypse, meeting three strangers along the way and together taking an extended road trip in an attempt to find a sanctuary free from zombies.
Hi In some contexts, that will work - as a brief comment about a film However, you could put active verbs in, and some punctuation: - A geeky college kid is making his way through the zombie apocalypse. He meets three strangers along the way and together they take an extended road trip in an attempt to find a sanctuary free from zombies. Dave
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Hi
In some contexts, that will work - as a brief comment about a film
However, you could put active verbs in, and some punctuation:
- A geeky college kid is making his way through the zombie apocalypse. He meets three strangers along the way and together they take an extended road trip in an attempt to find a sanctuary free from zombies.
Dave