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Stevenukd Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
YOUTH
Dear Teachers,
1. Nowadays/Today the youth has to confront/deal with/cope with much pressure from many sides/directions, such as: having to enhance learning level, achieving career target, planning out the future, buying a house. These kinds of pressure make them feel like out of reach, so hard/difficult to gain at the same time. Even when thinking about buying a house for one’s self, and when hearing about the price is enough to make them flinch and they think that the house just exists in their dreams. And many people have to cancel their intention, they wait for a couple of more years, they wait until their salary is raised or wait for decreases of housing prices. But for me, I will try my best to earn much more money, so that I can buy an apartment on hire purchase through a bank, and after 10 years later, the flat will belong to me officially.
2. – If you love someone, just let him or her be free.
- If that person comes back to you, that person will be yours forever.
- If that person doesn’t come back, that’s not the person who is worth for you to think of/about.
- Are the sentences above natural?
Thanks very much to Teachers,
Stevenukd
1. Nowadays/Today the youth has to confront/deal with/cope with much pressure from many sides/directions, such as: having to enhance learning level, achieving career target, planning out the future, buying a house. These kinds of pressure make them feel like out of reach, so hard/difficult to gain at the same time. Even when thinking about buying a house for one’s self, and when hearing about the price is enough to make them flinch and they think that the house just exists in their dreams. And many people have to cancel their intention, they wait for a couple of more years, they wait until their salary is raised or wait for decreases of housing prices. But for me, I will try my best to earn much more money, so that I can buy an apartment on hire purchase through a bank, and after 10 years later, the flat will belong to me officially.
2. – If you love someone, just let him or her be free.
- If that person comes back to you, that person will be yours forever.
- If that person doesn’t come back, that’s not the person who is worth for you to think of/about.
- Are the sentences above natural?
Thanks very much to Teachers,
Stevenukd
Top answer
Hi, I made quite a few changes, including some small ones, so check carefully, OK? Best wishes, Clive 1. Nowadays/Today youth has to confront/deal with/cope with all are OK a lot of pressure from many sides/directions both are OK , such as: having to learn more, achieving a career target, planning out the future, and sbuying a house.
- Hi, I made quite a few changes, including some small ones, so check carefully, OK?
- Best wishes, Clive 1.
- Nowadays/Today youth has to confront/deal with/cope with all are OK a lot of pressure from many sides/directions both are OK , such as: having to learn more, achieving a career target, planning out the future, and sbuying a house.
- These kinds of pressure make them feel like success is out of reach, and so hard/difficult to gain at the same time.
- Even thinking about buying a house for one’s self and hearing about the price is enough to make them flinch, and they think that the house just exists in their dreams.
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Hi,
I made quite a few changes, including some small ones, so check carefully, OK?
Best wishes, Clive
1. Nowadays/Today youth has to confront/deal with/cope with all are OK a lot of pressure from many sides/directions both are OK , such as: having to learn more, achieving a
I made quite a few changes, including some small ones, so check carefully, OK?
Best wishes, Clive
1. Nowadays/Today youth has to confront/deal with/cope with all are OK a lot of pressure from many sides/directions both are OK , such as: having to learn more, achieving a
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Dear friends,
I have heard the phrases «the youth of today» and «today's youth». They are perhaps also suitable.
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