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Cngoegan Posted 21 years ago
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You're a grammatical genius, I'm not - please help with my three paragraphs!
I am struggling with the following three paragraphs; I keep changing the punctuation and though I have read through many posts on this forum, I'm still not sure if they are correct. Any help would be very much appreciated!!
This book isn't just a bunch of information about trends or business success. If I give you information, it requires no response, no reaction and no results. Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested and acted upon will change your life forever.
He defines 'emotional intelligence'; a trait that is not measured by IQ tests, as a set of skills including control of one's impulses, self-motivation, empathy, and social competence.
Here's what I found: They talked too much and listened too little, they mechanically executed the tasks, but lacked the magic of a simple smile, they had talent, but no passion. If they were questioned, they'd argue or talk over people, if they were rejected, they'd shove it down their throats a little harder, and if someone showed interest, they'd over do it and talk them right out of it. All from a lack of emotional control.
This book isn't just a bunch of information about trends or business success. If I give you information, it requires no response, no reaction and no results. Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested and acted upon will change your life forever.
He defines 'emotional intelligence'; a trait that is not measured by IQ tests, as a set of skills including control of one's impulses, self-motivation, empathy, and social competence.
Here's what I found: They talked too much and listened too little, they mechanically executed the tasks, but lacked the magic of a simple smile, they had talent, but no passion. If they were questioned, they'd argue or talk over people, if they were rejected, they'd shove it down their throats a little harder, and if someone showed interest, they'd over do it and talk them right out of it. All from a lack of emotional control.
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What about? Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested , and acted upon , will change your life forever. He defines 'emotional intelligence' ( a trait that is not measured by IQ tests ) as a set of skills including control of one's impulses, self-motivation, empathy, and social competence.
- What about?
- Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested , and acted upon , will change your life forever.
- He defines 'emotional intelligence' ( a trait that is not measured by IQ tests ) as a set of skills including control of one's impulses, self-motivation, empathy, and social competence.
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What about?
Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested, and acted upon, will change your life forever.
He defines 'emotional intelligence' (a trait that is not measured by IQ tests) as a set of skills including control of one's impulses, self-motivation, empathy, and social competence.
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This book isn't just a lot of information about trends or business success; information requires no response, no reaction and no results. Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested and acted upon, will change your life forever.
Here's what I found: They talked too much and listened too little; they mechanically executed the tasks, but lacked the mag
This book isn't just a lot of information about trends or business success; information requires no response, no reaction and no results. Rather, it is a book of instructions which, if digested and acted upon, will change your life forever.
Here's what I found: They talked too much and listened too little; they mechanically executed the tasks, but lacked the mag
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