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Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

YOUR VICE

Dear Teachers,

1. I am really disappointed about you, you never can correct your evil habit / your vice.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

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Stevenukd Dear Teachers, 1. I am really disappointed about you, you never can correct your evil habit / your vice. - Is this natural to say?

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  • Stevenukd Dear Teachers, 1.
  • I am really disappointed about you, you never can correct your evil habit / your vice.
  • - Is this natural to say?
  • Thanks very much to Teachers, Stevenukd.
  • Hi, Your sentence has a comma splice problem.
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StevenukdDear Teachers,

1. I am really disappointed about you, you never can correct your evil habit / your vice.

- Is this natural to say?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
Hi,

Your sentence has a comma splice problem. Here is my suggestion:

I am really disappointed in you. Your evil ha
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Hi,

The terms 'evil habit / vice' seem melodramatic for everyday use. Most people would just speak of 'your bad habits'.

Clive
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