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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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00 11 blockquote1-10 Please helping me to correct my English Language. 22 br22 blockquote
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22 blockquote- 20 Wisma shop sale target: RM 30,000 21 li
- 20 Labuan Ferry Terminal: RM 12,000 22 li
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31 b 30 31 blockquote30 Yean Chung Training Schedule: 42 blockquote42 b 30 31 blockquote32 br42 blockquote
41 blockquote40 i. One week in K.K training 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 ii. First Day Visit All KK outlet and KK office. 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 iii. Second Day will be observed and train him as a promoter in Airport Outlet 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 iv. Day Three will train him in Shopping Mall outlet ( Wisma Merdeka Shop and Booth ) 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 v. Day Four and day Five have a visit to Labuan Outlet. 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 vi. Day Six Summary of Training . 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 vii. Conclusion of training and how to promote Diamoney product 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote40 viii. Return to head quarter 52 blockquote50 41 blockquote42 blockquote51 b 40 41 blockquote42 br52 b 42 br
51 blockquote50 Member Card. 62 blockquote60 51 blockquote52 br62 blockquote
61 blockquote60 I. Dj member card must continue or re-new existing member. 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 II. Promoters have the authority to give free member to customer. 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 III. Dj member can accumulate their purchase point to redeem free gift. 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 IV. Hari raya offer : 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 a. First item 30% and second item 50% , if total net purchase is more RM 500 free Green pua . 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 V. Year End sale : 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 a. 50% discount on every item and net purchase RM 300 get one mystery gift. 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote60 b. Christmas sale : 25% (net purchase RM 300 ) plus 25% discount. 72 blockquote70 61 blockquote62 br72 blockquote
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81 blockquote80 Diamoney Jewellery input new material of product new strategic: 92 blockquote90 81 blockquote80 91 ol92 blockquote90 91 li
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91 blockquote90 Company can consider sale 9k white gold chain.. 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 Link with airport taxi 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 Promote localize souvenir to tourist other visitor to Borneo 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 Those who come to airport by taxi can bring their taxi bill to claim the souvenir or gift with special price. ( RM 48) 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 All the taxi driver can join as diamoney dealer and get extract income. 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 Taxi driver can have diamoney brochure like 8 special design for tourist 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
91 blockquote90 Taxi driver can earn minimum RM 5 for each item that their passenger purchase. 102 blockquote100 91 li- 92 br
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91 blockquote90 Total commission pay out to dealer is pay on 15th of the month same as our promoter. 102 blockquote102 li92 br102 li 92 li 92 li 92 li 92 li 92 li 92 ol
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111 blockquote110 Local Trip : 122 blockquote120 111 blockquote112 br122 blockquote
121 blockquote120 1. 130 130 Pulau Redang 132 blockquote130 121 blockquote122 br132 blockquote
131 blockquote130 2. 140 140 Penang 142 blockquote140 131 blockquote132 br142 blockquote
141 blockquote140 3. 150 150 Kuching 152 blockquote151 b 140 141 blockquote142 br152 b 142 br
151 blockquote150 Oversea Trip: 162 blockquote160 151 blockquote152 br162 blockquote
161 blockquote160 1. 170 170 Bali Island Jarkata 172 blockquote170 161 blockquote162 br172 blockquote
171 blockquote170 2. 180 180 Bangkok and Pataya 182 blockquote180 171 blockquote172 br182 blockquote
181 blockquote180 3. 190 190 Korea 192 blockquote190 181 blockquote182 br192 blockquote
191 blockquote190 4. 200 200 Singapore 202 blockquote201 b 190 191 blockquote192 br202 b 192 br
201 blockquote200 Lahad Datu Mobile Team: 212 blockquote210 201 blockquote202 br212 blockquote
211 blockquote210 Location: 220 220 Dewan Rakyat Lahad Datu Town 222 blockquote220 211 blockquote212 br222 blockquote
221 blockquote220 Date: 27 June 2008 to 6 of July 2008 232 blockquote230 221 blockquote222 br232 blockquote
231 blockquote230 1. 240 240 Sale Strategic is buy one free 242 blockquote240 231 blockquote232 br242 blockquote
241 blockquote240 2. 250 250 Nett purchase RM 150 free earring ring 252 blockquote250 241 blockquote242 br252 blockquote
251 blockquote250 3. 260 260 All color stone earring list as RM 88 or RM 98 262 blockquote260 251 blockquote252 br262 blockquote
261 blockquote260 4. 270 270 Some others color stone series buy one free two. 272 blockquote272 blockquote
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1 i 00 Wisma shop sale target: RM 30,000 02 i 00 [If you are talking about the target for a sale (a special promotional event) then this is fine. ] 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Labuan Ferry Terminal: 02 i 00 RM 12,000 00 [It's not clear to me what you're trying to say about the ferry terminal. ] 02 br 01 b 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Yean Chung Training Schedule: 02 i 02 br 02 br 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 01 i 00 i.
- 1 i 00 Wisma shop sale target: RM 30,000 02 i 00 [If you are talking about the target for a sale (a special promotional event) then this is fine.
- ] 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Labuan Ferry Terminal: 02 i 00 RM 12,000 00 [It's not clear to me what you're trying to say about the ferry terminal.
- ] 02 br 01 b 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Yean Chung Training Schedule: 02 i 02 br 02 br 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 01 i 00 i.
- 02 b 02 i 00 [Consistent spelling of KK] 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 ii.
- 01 del 00 First Day 02 del 00 01 b 00 Day One: 02 b 00 Visit 01 b 00 a 02 b 00 ll KK outlet 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 and 01 b 00 the 02 b 00 KK office.
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1 i 00 Wisma shop sale target: RM 30,000 02 i 00 [If you are talking about the target for a sale (a special promotional event) then this is fine. If you mean the target for general ongoing business then "sale 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 target" would be better, and it might be a good idea to specify whether this is per day, per week, or whatever.] 02 br
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