Your help about a Letter of motivation for BMW

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00First I m sorry about my very bad control in English.02br
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00I need some urgent help in writing a letter of motivation for BMW group for application job !02br
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00I have tried writing one by myself but it's not coming like I hope.02br
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00Can somebody please have a look at it below and make any necessary changes / corrections for me ?02br
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00This is my Letter :02br
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00Dear Sir, Dear Madam,02br
00Two principal criteria direct my choice towards your Group BMW :02br
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00To integrate very a large company and to choose a “job with prospects”.02br
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00Your company is particularly attractive because it offers the face impassioning of modern automobile and corresponds best to my technical curiosity. I am sure to profit there from a prosperous environment where the strong reactivity of the market is an additional emulation.02br
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