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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Your accomplishment

Hello,

My most important achievement in my life was when I got my degree from Sechenov medical Academy for two reasons. First, after 6 years studying hard I could get my degree in medicine. I was very excited since studying medicine was very tough and not all students could get an honor diploma. Second , I could work as a physician in my country and earn money. Obviously, not all women in my country have a higher education or know any foreign language. So, having a financial independence and prestigious job are two important things that made proud of.

Tank you for your time and effort rectifying my paragraph.
  

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Dear Quaereeverum, Quaere Verum = seek after truth. I like that. If this paragraph pertains to you personally, bravo and congratulations.

  • Dear Quaereeverum, Quaere Verum = seek after truth.
  • I like that.
  • If this paragraph pertains to you personally, bravo and congratulations.
  • No matter where you are in the world, I still believe that it is more difficult for a woman to be awarded a Medical Degree than a man.
  • Perhaps you would like to acknowledge the assistance of some special person or people that helped you achieve your two accomplishments.
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Dear Quaereeverum,

Quaere Verum = seek after truth. I like that.

If this paragraph pertains to you personally, bravo and congratulations.

No matter where you are in the world, I still believe that it is more difficult for a woman to be awarded a Medical Degree than a man. Perhaps you would like to acknowledge the assistance of some special person or people that helped yo

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