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Stevenukd Posted 20 years ago
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Dear Teachers,

1.When I was young/little/a child I lived in a small house in the hometown, Tan Binh District. I had to move/go to the city to have a better life, because I think there's no place great like the city.

2.In the past , I can remeber my house was in the suburb. There weren't any sofas on the floor. The yard outside was not very bigbut there were a very beautiful flower garden and a big vegetable garden on the left of my house. I often jumped rope/skipped with friends in the yard. There was a ricefield/paddy field behind the house. There were many tall trees outside. You can have a fantastic view from my house.

- Are these natural?

3. - When will you be back to the UK?
- When do you get back to US?
- When will you go back to Canada?

- Thanks a lot to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

Top answer

Hi, I've made a few changes. When I was a child, I lived in a small house in Tan Binh District. I had to move to the city to have a better life.

  • Hi, I've made a few changes.
  • When I was a child, I lived in a small house in Tan Binh District.
  • I had to move to the city to have a better life.
  • I think there's no place as great as a city.
  • In the past , I can remember my house was in the suburb.
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Hi,

I've made a few changes.

1.When I was a child, I lived in a small house in Tan Binh District. I had to move to the city to have a better life. I think there's no place as great as a city.

young you might be young but not a child, eg 20 /little a slightly informal, child-like way of speaking / a child
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