You Wouldn't Cry if I Died

0 I have written this story and I need your comments and ideas about it please.. 02br
00Put in mind that I am not a native speaker of English and mind my English... 02br
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00You Wouldn't Cry if I Died 02br
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00 The dark gloomy clouds were blocking the sky, when I left home following steps of the past. I walked lonely in the darkest vacant passages. It was one of the coldest nights in the year. Nobody can be seen and no voice can be heard, but echoes of the past that were roaming on my head. It was three after midnight when I arrived at almost an abandoned house. A house that once was full of joy and laughter was closed and dark. My friend's home… 02br
00I stood near the front door, 02br
00"You are no more here Midnight Hawk" I whispered 02br
00My friend liked to be called like that. He would have smiled hearing me calling him like that. 02br
00Although it began raining, there were lights glittering in the sky; lights of memories which guided me somewhere, faraway. I walked but when the lights faded I stopped. I looked around myself and found that I was in the middle of a graveyard, near a small grave, a grave I knew very well. 02br
00I knelt down wet, dirty, and exhausted and my hands touching the grave. Suddenly I felt something so warm coming to me from inside the grave. Then a star fell down and I was taken somewhere in the nearest past. Exactly three years ago… 02br
00"Guilbert don't worry it's a normal process. They'll change my blood and give me a new one. This happens to all people who have anemia, besides it is not the first time I do it" My friend said 02br
00"Yeah but I'm afraid, it is so scary" I said 02br
00"Huh, don't worry friend I'll be fine soon, it won't take them too much to do it" 02br
00"But…I am so worried" 02br
00"Come on I'm the one having the operation not you" calming me down 02br
00"Yeah but you are my friend you know" 02br
00"I know but I'm only one friend. There are many other friends who are better than me" 02br
00"No you are the best, the only best friend" 02br
00"Guilbert stop this you're strong, I don't understand why you are so worried!" 02br
00"I don't know?" I whispered 02br
00"You wouldn't cry if I died, will you?" he smiled at me 02br
00"No don't say that. You will live inshallah" I stared at his face 02br
00"What if I vanished disappeared, faded like a dream? You wouldn't cry, would you?" he said, staring back at me 02br
00"Enough, for God's sake stop this. Don't speak as if you are going to die. You are still young and remember our promise, 'Together Forever'" 02br
00"Yeah that's the spirit. See you after the operation then" tapping my shoulder and entering the hospital with his big brother. He left me alone, worried and unsatisfied. 02br
00 My friend was so unlucky that day. The operation did not go well for the doctors made a horrible mistake. They gave my friend a wrong type of blood which did not match his blood. It was so hard to believe that such a mistake could occur, but surely fate was not a mistake. The result was so painful to him. He died immediately after the operation. Death absorbed his soul. It was so hard to me to accept his death. 02br
00We buried him that night. His body was not like a normal one when we buried him. It was like a body left in the surface for days. 02br
00The sky cried that night, wetting us, but washing our tears. 02br
00I took my hands off the grave, looked sadly to my friend's grave and recalled his words: 02br
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00"You wouldn't cry if I died, would you?... You wouldn't cry if I died, would you?... " 02br
00I tried to stop my tears but go back home but the sweet of my heart burst like an extreme explosion… 02br
00"What makes you so sure friend? What makes you so sure...?" I screamed, weeping enormously in that dreadful graveyard 02br
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00I hope you liked it 02br
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