You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

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Answer:Dear Teacher,I am a high school student, and I am writing to enquire about information your classes.I was passing through your classes while you were teaching the students, And I was surprising because of your pupils spoke English fluently. Besides, I just realize that your place is near to my home. Therefore, it would be convenient for me if I could take up your classes.  I will take an IELTS exam in the last year. Thus, I want to take a English course to improve my English abilities, especially academic English.Firstly, I wonder if you could possibly send me a small overview of the entry requirement. I would also like to know the schedule of the classes.Secondly, I would be interested to know your certificates to show your teaching ability.Lastly, how much tuition fee in a course is? And how long do I have to take the class to get 7.0 IELTS overall?I would appreciate it if you could send the details to my email.I look forward to hearing from you.Yours Faithfully,Dat Le Sy

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Topic: You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

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Dear Teacher, (You need to use a name for the teacher.)

I am a high school student, and I am writing to enquire about ~~information~~ your classes.

I was passing through (That is not a good description. Did you interrupt the class?) your classes while you were teaching the students, And I was ~~surprising~~ (wrong form) surprised because of (wrong usage) your pupils (see image below.) spoke English fluently. Besides, I just realize that your ~~plac~~e school is near to my home. Therefore, it would be convenient for me if I could take up your classes.

I will take an IELTS exam in the last year. (Not good - Do you mean next year?) Thus, I want to take an English course to improve my English abilities, especially academic English.

~~Firstly~~, First, I wonder if you could possibly send me a short ~~small~~ overview of the admissions requirements. ~~entry requirement~~. I would also like to know the schedule of ~~the~~ classes.

~~Secondly~~, Second, I would be interested to know ~~your~~ what teaching certificates you have. ~~to show your teaching ability.~~

~~Lastly~~, Finally, how much will it cost to take each class? ~~tuition fee in a course is~~? And how long will it take for me to achieve an overall score of ~~do I have to take the class to get~~ 7.0 in the IELST exam. ~~IELTS overall~~?

I would appreciate it if you could send the details to my email address.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

Dat Le Sy

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