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Nikitus Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

You talk about her and your eyes shine

In the sentence "You talk about her and your eyes shine", is the grammar correct?

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Add a comma between her & and , and the sentence is correct. I think there is a better word than shine , however: 'glisten' or 'sparkle' would be better. 'Shine' implies a radiation or glow.

— Philip

  • Add a comma between her & and , and the sentence is correct.
  • I think there is a better word than shine , however: 'glisten' or 'sparkle' would be better.
  • 'Shine' implies a radiation or glow.
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Add a comma between her & and, and the sentence is correct. I think there is a better word than shine, however: 'glisten' or 'sparkle' would be better. 'Shine' implies a radiation or glow.
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