I'd use "people" instead of "persons".
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Yoong LiatThe standard plural of 'person' in BrE is 'people': 'one person', 'two people'. 'Persons' is only used in very formal or legal contexts: Persons convicted of this office are liable to a fine of $500. In AmE, 'persons' is more widely used as the plural.
'People' when it means 'more than one person' is plural, but 'a people', meaning 'a group of h