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Ehsan Samimi Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
XYZ Company remnant balance checking
Can someone help me please our customer want renewal his contract but I want to understand, Has it have internet charges or not, so I am emailing to my boos for checking the mention customer balance.
Dear {name}
Kindly find out the attached requisition regarding the XYZ international private office wants to extend the internet contract so hence the internet activation department referred to us for checking the remnant charges balance of mentioned Office, so please confirm us.
Dear {name}
Kindly find out the attached requisition regarding the XYZ international private office wants to extend the internet contract so hence the internet activation department referred to us for checking the remnant charges balance of mentioned Office, so please confirm us.
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The meaning is not clear mainly because the sentence structure is wrong. I recommend that you split the sentence up into small parts, with full stops / periods. Then we can understand better what you mean.
- The meaning is not clear mainly because the sentence structure is wrong.
- I recommend that you split the sentence up into small parts, with full stops / periods.
- Then we can understand better what you mean.
- Kind regards, Michael
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The meaning is not clear mainly because the sentence structure is wrong. I recommend that you split the sentence up into small parts, with full stops / periods. Then we can understand better what you mean. Kind regards, Michael
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Can someone help me please, XYZ company want renewal his internet contract but I don't have any information about the XYZ company charges balance, so how can I write an email to my manager?
Dear sir,
Kindly find out the attached file requisition regarding the XYZ company, The XYZ company wants to extend the internet contract so hence the internet activation department referred to us a
Dear sir,
Kindly find out the attached file requisition regarding the XYZ company, The XYZ company wants to extend the internet contract so hence the internet activation department referred to us a
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