(WT2 8.10) Please help me with this essay. Thank you.

Please help me with this essay. Thank you.

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, wildlife protection has become a prevalent issue to the general public,. Among divergent opinions, some people claim that the attention and resources to protect wild animals and birds are overwhelmingly unnecessary. From my viewpoint, I totally agree with the point of view.

It is obvious that people are so concerned about wild creatures that it turns out to be extraggerating. Whenever there is an information about, for example, a bear imprisoned in cage, animal protectors from all over the world will make criticism, require that bear to be released. Moreover, in the information age, once an arrticle is published, the information could be spreading so widely that it can reach anyone’s awareness. Just a small actio such as deriving a cat of food can be accused by people from every region in the world.

In addition, anually, a huge amount of money is invested in the protection of wild animals and births by numerous global non-governmental organisations. Because of that, millions of of wild animals could continue surviving and breeding, escaping from the hand of hunters. At the same time, however, in sone underdeveloped countries or regions where wars still happen, residents have to suffer from the lack of basic human demands such as living, eating or wearing. That is the main reason why thousands people die of starvation and many other people decide to start their journey of migration, making for another promising land in a great danger.

In conclusion, it seems to me that wild animals nowadays draw human’s attention and resources excessively and unnecessarily. It would be much better if people make use of that funds to increase the life condition for in need residents.