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The diagram depicts the furniture arrangement inside a super luxury jumbo jet named A350.

On the head of the jet settles a Vip galley followed by the first personal space for masters consisting of a bathroom, a bedroom and an office. Beside those rooms, two emergency exists are put on the opposite side of each other. From the exists, the bar and lounge can be seen connected directly with the executive seating space and the conference room by a straight way in the middle of the jet. In dinning room, a large round table is equipped in the center with various desks around it.

Getting out of the room, people can see the second couple of emergency exists which seperate the personal space for VIP with the previous room. On the one side of the cabin are bedroom, lavatory and master guest bedroom whereas there are two more guest bedrooms on the other side. Next to the cabin, a cinema room with 12 seats is placed in the rest of the A350 jet.

With all luxury spaces for guests, the floor plan appears to meet all basic needs like a comfortable house.

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The diagram depicts the furniture arrangement (It shows much more than furniture!) inside a super luxury jumbo jet named the A350.

On the head (At the front..) of the jet settles (wrong word) a Vip (wrong capitalization) galley followed by the ~~first personal space for masters~~ suite consisting of a bathroom, a bedroom and an office. Beside those rooms, two emergency exists are put on the opposite side of each other. From the exists, the bar and lounge can be seen connected directly with the executive seating space and the conference room by a straight way in the middle of the jet. In (missing word) dinning room, a large round table is ~~equipped~~ in the center with various desks around it.

Getting out of the room, people can see the second couple of emergency exists which seperate the personal space for VIP with the previous room. On the one side of the cabin are bedroom, lavatory and master guest bedroom ~~whereas there are~~ with two more guest bedrooms on the other side. Next to the cabin, a cinema room with 12 seats is placed ~~in the rest~~ at the rear of the A350 jet.

With all luxury spaces for guests, the floor plan appears to meet all basic needs like a comfortable house.

Model essay:

The luxury A350 jet is laid out with facilities and areas for sleeping, working and entertaining to serve a relatively small number of travellers. There are four major divisions of the space: masters suite, entertainment area, guest quarters and cinema. Starting at the nose end of the jet, there is a VIP galley and the master suite with a bedroom, bathroom and office. The small private office has a central desk and three chairs. There is a passageway leading from the galley along one side of the plane to the next area, which is designed for entertainment. It has a bar and lounge with an executive seating area. There are also two emergency exits. Past the bar and lounge is a large room which serves as both a dining room and a conference room. The large central table seats up to 10 people. There are two more emergency exits on the aft side of this room followed by a space with accommodations for guests, consisting of two bedrooms (VIP and master guest) and a lavatory. A central passageway leads between the bedrooms to a 12-seat cinema at the rear of the plane.

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