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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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When you pull into your driveway after a long day at work and your friend is dropping off some great things from scentsy.
  

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You need a main clause. eg When you pull into your driveway after a long day at work and your friend is dropping off some great things from scentsy, you are surprised. What does ''scentsy" mean?

— Clive

  • You need a main clause.
  • eg When you pull into your driveway after a long day at work and your friend is dropping off some great things from scentsy, you are surprised.
  • What does ''scentsy" mean?
  • Clive
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You need a main clause.
eg When you pull into your driveway after a long day at work and your friend is dropping off some great things from scentsy,
you are surprised.

What does ''scentsy" mean?

Clive
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CliveWhat does ''scentsy" mean?
Scentsy is a company that makes and sells scented wax and candle warmers by direct sales through local representatives.
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To the original poster ===>
You need to tell the reader that it is a name (ie a proper noun). You do this by using a capital letter. Capital letters are important in written English.

When you pull into your driveway after a long day at work and your friend is dropping off some great things from Scentsy,
you are surprised.
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