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Linhnguyen4014 Posted 8 years ago
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Writting TASK 2:HOBBY

Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Hobby is a leisure activity based on individuals’ personalities. While some enjoy easy hobbies, others think the difficult ones gain more pleasure. In my opinion, both types of hobbies have the funny experiences so I do not agree with the statement that only challenging hobbies can be enjoyable.


On the one hand, many people are attractive by easy hobbies. Take swimming as an example. It is the simple activity not requiring any difficult skills or expensive equipment. Everyone is able to enjoy swimming because of the benefits of health condition. Besides, reading books is another common and easy hobby. With the modern technology nowadays, people can easily and conveniently find any book on the internet without fees.


On the other hand, difficult hobbies make people feel satisfactory in a different way. The more challenges people get, the more excited they feel when managing these challenges successfully. In my case, photography is a hobby requiring particular technicalities. The more I learn about creating beautiful pictures, the more excited I feel when opening my minds. Gaining the higher level of performances makes me feel much eager and satisfactory because of the better results. Therefore, people never find it bored when gaining success in challenging hobbies.


In my conclusion, each type of hobbies has their own interests depending on individuals' taste. Therefore, it is hard to say only difficult hobbies can be enjoyable.



  

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? I have highlighted the text that is unnatural or ungrammatical.

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  • To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  • I have highlighted the text that is unnatural or ungrammatical.
  • (missing word) Hobby is a leisure activity based on individuals’ personalities.
  • While some enjoy easy hobbies, others think the difficult ones gain more pleasure.
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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I have highlighted the text that is unnatural or ungrammatical.


(missing word) Hobby is a leisure activity based on individuals’ personalities. While some enjoy easy hobbies, others think the difficult ones gain

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