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The chart illustrates the number of population growth for china and india over the course of 80 years staring in 1970.                                                                   Looking at the graph it is immediately obvious that the population of china and India experienced an upward trend. Additonaly, India registers the highest figures.                                                                    The propotion of China population stood at 850 million in 1970. This figures is predicted to increase to approximately 1400 in 2020. A similar trend was witnessed in the population of India which has increased dramatically during the research period.                                       India’s population was estimated at 600 million in 1970. This figure is predicted to approximately 1400 miliion people in 2020 and then this will reach a peak in 2050.

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The chart (wrong word. The figure is not a chart.) illustrates the number of population growth (wrong description.) for china and india over the course of 80 years staring in 1970. ~~Looking at the graph it is immediately obvious that~~ I(Do not write clauses like this in Task 1. "Immediately obvious" is your opinion or conclusion. It is not an unbiased description of the graph. Do not write opinions or conclusions in Task 1. That is for writing Task 2. ) The population of china and India experienced an upward trend. Additonaly, India registers the highest figures. The propotion (??) of China (wrong form) population stood at 850 million in 1970. This figures (wrong form, wrong word) is predicted to increase to approximately 1400 in 2020. A similar trend was witnessed (wrong word) in the population of India which has increased dramatically during the research period. (Does the figure label say it is a research study? A "research period" is always in the past because it is when the actual data was collected. e.g. "In this study, we report the spread of fire ants in the southern US over the period from 1950 to 2010." ) India’s population was estimated (Does the printed information say that these are estimates?) at 600 million in 1970. This ~~figure~~ is predicted to (missing word) approximately 1400 miliion people in 2020 and then this will reach a peak in 2050. (Do you see a high point followed by a decline? That is the definition of a "peak." How do you know that there will be a decline after 2050?)

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The chart illustrates inhabitants of two nations namedly China and India change between 1970 and 2050.
It is clear from the chart that the proportion of resident in China and India experienced an upward trend. Additionally, India’s popualtion registers the highest figure.
In the year 1970, China’s population stood at 850 million people. This figure is predicted to reach a peak of approximately 1400 million people in 2020; then it will remain the same until 2040. For next ten years, it will be slight drop to 1300 million people.
There was a dramatic increase for India population . It was around 600 million people in 1970. This will be sharply rise to reach the same as China in 2030 to 1400 million people. Prediction show that the India population growth will increase to their highest point to 1600 in 2050.

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