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Could you help me,anyone please?

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

OK. Write an paragraph, and we'll check it for you.

Clive

Shikhabosu · Answer

Ok I'm try to writing a pragrap.

I'm from bangladesh. Our country is a poor country.Mainly here live somany religious people it's like Old( sanathan) Islam, Christan,Buddist.

Our native language is bengli. Most of the people are very poor, but very friendly and frank.
Our main food is rice, fish and vegetable.Most of the people are non vegetarian.Our people depent on the agriculture based work. We produce Rice,vegetable, tea, some fruites and fish, and srimp also.We have some industry as like garments, tenary and drug.we export some drug at USA, Uk and middelest area and some srimp and garments but we import someny things from somany country, because our population rate is high so our goverment can't manage food, education, hospitality localy. Our geographical area is 556 squre miles but our population 16 billion. Our education rate also low, it's 45%. So we have very few skill manpower.They(skill person)don't want to work for rural area, they want to live capitacity, because capitacity has all advantage for all. it's very big problem for our country and big population also problem.We have somany problem but I proud for my country. We've biggest mangove forest, sea beach( ***'es bazar), we celebret our bengali new year because we have a bengali calander it's mataing for agriculture and other's work, we've Language day it's call international mother's languages day on 21st February,indepentday on 26th March.

Clive · Answer

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Here are some edits. Ask about any changes that you don't understand, OK?

Clive

I'm from Bangladesh. Our country is a poor country. So many religious people live here that it's like Old( sanathan) Islam, Christianity, Buddihism.

Our native language is Bengali. Most of the people are very poor, but very friendly and frank.
Our main food is rice, fish and vegetables. Most of the people are non-vegetarian. Our people depend on agriculture based work. We produce rice,vegetables, tea, some fruits and fish, and shrimp also. always leave a space after a period We have some industries like garments, tanneries and drugs. We export some drugs to the USA, the UK and the Midde-Eastt area, and some shrimp and garments, but we import so many things from so many countries, because our population rate is high so our goverment can't manage food, education, hospitality locally. Our geographical area is 556 squre miles but our population is 16 billion. Our education rate also low. It's 45%. So we have very few skilled manpower.They (skilled persons) don't want to work in rural areas. Tthey want to live in the capital city, because it has all advantages for all. It's very big problem for our country and our big population is also a problem. We have so many problems but I am proud of my country. We've the biggest mangove forest and sea beach( ***'es bazar). We celebrate our Bengali New Year because we have a Bengali calendar. It's used for agriculture and other's work. We've Language Day. It's called International Mother Languages Day, on 21st February. Our Independence Day is on 26th March.

Shikhabosu · Answer

Last you reply me write a paragrap,

then i try to write a paragrap, next time you reply where some

Here are some edits. Ask about any changes that you don't understand, OK?

Then reply Where and what did you changed on a pragraph

I'm from Bangladesh. Our country is a poor country. So many religious people live here that it's like Old( sanathan) Islam, Christianity, Buddihism.

Our native language is Bengali. Most of the people are very poor, but very friendly and frank.
Our main food is rice, fish and vegetables. Most of the people are non-vegetarian. Our people depend on agriculture based work. We produce rice,vegetables, tea, some fruits and fish, and shrimp also. always leave a space after a period We have some industries like garments, tanneries and drugs. We export some drugs to the USA, the UK and the Midde-Eastt area, and some shrimp and garments, but we import so many things from so many countries, because our population rate is high so our goverment can't manage food, education, hospitality locally. Our geographical area is 556 squre miles but our population is 16 billion. Our education rate also low. It's 45%. So we have very few skilled manpower.They (skilled persons) don't want to work in rural areas. Tthey want to live in the capital city, because it has all advantages for all. It's very big problem for our country and our big population is also a problem. We have so many problems but I am proud of my country. We've the biggest mangove forest and sea beach( ***'es bazar). We celebrate our Bengali New Year because we have a Bengali calendar. It's used for agriculture and other's work. We've Language Day. It's called International Mother Languages Day, on 21st February. Our Independence Day is on 26th March.

Shikhabosu · Answer

Political situtation:

Our country is a repalican country. We trust the democart policy. We've somney political party. But Two parties are very famous in our country. Most of people are fan of them. Our goverment is a perlametery goverment. Our goverment and opposition party's leader has no compormisation betwen them. I think it's bad for our country.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Political situtation:

Our country is a repalican country. We trust the democart policy. We've somney political party. But Two parties are very famous in our country. Most of people are fan of them. Our goverment is a perlametery goverment. Our goverment and opposition party's leader has no compormisation betwen them. I think it's bad for our country.

Political situtation:

Our country is a republic. We trust democratic policies. We've so many political parties, but two are very famous in our country. Most people are suporters of them. Our goverment is a arliamentary one. Our goverment and opposition parties' leaders have no compromise betwen them. I think it's bad for our country.

Clive

Shikhabosu · Answer

Hi clive

You have spend time for me. Thank you so much

I've written : most of people are fan of them

you : most people are supportgers of them, i am not understan Why you dont use "of"

I : Our goverment is a perlamentery(perlametery) goverment , here i had spelling mistek

you: Our goverment is a arliamentary one why you use it

pleas reply

New paragraph:

We're poor country. So we have many problem. Our most of the one problem is population. Other problem is humen rights voilet.

I'm going to write a story about humen right voilet, I think you know it you wathched on b.b.c world news. it's a verey sad news.

Ms Rumana Morshed is a teacher of Internal Relation department, Dhaka university, Her husband also educated person,They have solven family.But she torchered by her husband (Mr. Hassan) , he has burned her nose, mouth and eyes then she lost her eyes.

How can do it human being?

Clive · Answer

HI,

I've written : most of people are fan of them

you : most people are supportgers of them, i am not understan Why you dont use "of"

You can say

most people Here, 'most' is an adjective. You are talking about people in general.

most of the people Here, 'most' is a noun. In addition, the reader needs to know which people you are talking about.

I : Our goverment is a perlamentery(perlametery) goverment , here i had spelling mistek

you: Our goverment is a arliamentary one why you use it Your word was a spelluing error,. So was mine, because I accidentaly omitted 'p'!. The word is spelled 'parliamentary'.

pleas reply

New paragraph:

We're poor country. So we have many problem. Our most of the one problem is population. Other problem is humen rights voilet.

I'm going to write a story about humen right voilet, I think you know it you wathched on b.b.c world news. it's a verey sad news.

Ms Rumana Morshed is a teacher of Internal Relation department, Dhaka university, Her husband also educated person,They have solven family.But she torchered by her husband (Mr. Hassan) , he has burned her nose, mouth and eyes then she lost her eyes.

How can do it human being?

We're a poor country, so we have many problems. Our main problem is population. Another problem is human rights violation. I'm going to write a story about human rights violation. I think you know it if you watched BBC world news. it's a very sad story.

Ms Rumana Morshed is a teacher in the Internal (International?) Relations department, Dhaka university. Her husband is also an educated person. They have solven (<<< ???) family, She was tortured by her husband (Mr. Hassan). He burned her nose, mouth and eyes, and then she lost her eyes.

How can a human being do that to another human being?

That's a terrible story!

Clive

Shikhabosu · Answer

Hi clive, How are you? my last praragrap was on Ms Rumana Morshad.,

My frirst quertion is I was :

Our most of the one problem is population. u said main problem explain me why u use that.

next one: i said

it's a verey sad news U used sad story, so tell me when i use story and when news.

Solven i used like that means they are not poor thay have no money problem and no social status problem.

Ms Rumana has recovered mentaly,but She had lost her eyes for lifetiem, it's a sad news for her.

thanks

Clive · Answer

Hi,

my last praragrap was on Ms Rumana Morshad.,

My frirst quertion is I was :

Our most of the one problem is population. u said main problem explain me why u use that.

Most of the one problem just does not make any sense.

next one: i said

it's a verey sad news U used sad story, so tell me when i use story and when news.

The problem is the article 'a'.

You can't say 'it's a. . . news', because news is not a countable noun.

You can say 'It's a very sad story' or 'it's very sad news'.

Solven i used like that means they are not poor thay have no money problem and no social status problem.

Oh, I see. The word is spelled 'solvent'. They are a solvent family. It's not a very idiomatic thing to say. Say 'They are a wealthy (or well off) family'.

Ms Rumana has recovered mentaly,but She had lost her eyes for lifetiem, it's a sad news for her.

A terrible story. What kind of man would do such a thing?

Clive

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