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The line chart illustrates the average daily maximum temperatures in degrees measured in Auckland and Christchurch(New Zealand), London and Edinburgh (the United Kingdom) throughout a year. Overall, the temperatures fluctuated in all of the 4 cities from January to December. Especially, the temperature was recorded to be lowest in July in Christchurch and Auckland and be highest in the same month in London and Edinburgh.
Commence with the temperatures approximately 25 and 24 degrees in January in Auckland and Christchurch. Respectively, the temperate undergo a gradual decrease to 20 and 18 degrees in April moreover reached the low to 15 and 11 in the middle of July sequentially. After that, the temperature in Auckland stayed static until September and moderately increased to above 20 degrees in the last month of the year. The temperature of Christchurch city after has declined to 11 degrees in July, it sharply rose to approximately 21 degrees in December.
Meanwhile, despite the starting point at 6 degrees, the daily maximum temperature in London and Edinburgh gradually climbed hitherto to the highest at 21 and 17 degrees in July sequentially and fell considerably to 7 degrees in December for both 2 cities