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Amy Ng Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writting about Food

Hello everyone,

The following passage is my passage talking about food. I'm trying to learn English. Please help me correct my grammar and suggest me better way to express it. Thank you so much.


My favorite cuisine is Chinese. Chinese cuisine has a variety of dishes and the chief uses several unique recipes and numerous ingredients, that's why many Chinese plates are various of taste. In addition, Westerner using cheese as s regular condiment in their recipe contrast with the Eastern people using special seasonings such as soy sauce, oyster sauce, fish sauce and so on, which make the dishes more delectable and flavorful.

My best-loved Chinese dish is Red Braised Pork Belly. It is a classic dish consisted of red braised pork belly marinated in a combination of garlic, ginger, soy sauce and oyster sauce.


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Thank you.

  

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I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I'd personally revise it - but there are many ways this could be written. : My favorite cuisine is Chinese. Chinese cuisine has a wide variety of dishes, using numerous ingredients, and recipes that are often unique.

  • I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I'd personally revise it - but there are many ways this could be written.
  • : My favorite cuisine is Chinese.
  • Chinese cuisine has a wide variety of dishes, using numerous ingredients, and recipes that are often unique.
  • The result of this variety is a multitude of different tastes.
  • My favorite dish of all is Red Braised Pork Belly, a classic recipe consisting of pork belly which has been marinated in soy sauce and oyster sauce, with garlic, ginger, and red food coloring, and then braised.
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I'm a native English speaker in the US, and this is how I'd personally revise it - but there are many ways this could be written. I'm not sure what you mean by "red." Does this mean "colored with red food dye"?:


My favorite cuisine is Chinese. Chinese cuisine has a wide variety of dishes, using numerous ingredients, and recipes that are often unique. The result of this variety

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My favorite cuisine is Chinese. Chinese cuisine has a variety of dishes and the chief uses chefs have many several unique recipes with numerous ingredients; (You cannot put a comma here. It is a comma splice error.) that's why

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