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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
writting a paragraph: moving house
I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience.
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especially for the garden. It was like the ´´Eden garden´´ because of it beauty. One day to the other they decided that they had spent long enough living there so my father announced taht we were moving to a smaller one. I didn´t even realize when one week we started to fill boxes with all our possessions.We packed and un packed, loaded and unloaded all the staff. We hired two vans. It was all a disaster, a real mess. Not only we had to organize all the thing but also we had to cleaned up. I lost the common sense and suddenly I became an automatic machine. I couldn´t sleep during the night . All my body hurted ald I felt like a foreigner in my own new home. I din´t know where I belog . I was like lost.
MOving to a new house is defenatelly stressful. Finally I could settled down and I could dela with all the negative emotions and thougth with the help of a psychologist.
Laura (from Argentina)
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especially for the garden. It was like the ´´Eden garden´´ because of it beauty. One day to the other they decided that they had spent long enough living there so my father announced taht we were moving to a smaller one. I didn´t even realize when one week we started to fill boxes with all our possessions.We packed and un packed, loaded and unloaded all the staff. We hired two vans. It was all a disaster, a real mess. Not only we had to organize all the thing but also we had to cleaned up. I lost the common sense and suddenly I became an automatic machine. I couldn´t sleep during the night . All my body hurted ald I felt like a foreigner in my own new home. I din´t know where I belog . I was like lost.
MOving to a new house is defenatelly stressful. Finally I could settled down and I could dela with all the negative emotions and thougth with the help of a psychologist.
Laura (from Argentina)
Top answer
I have made some suggestions and highlighted some problem areas. I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience. I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years.
- I have made some suggestions and highlighted some problem areas.
- I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience.
- I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years.
- Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was.
- Especially for the garden.
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I have made some suggestions and highlighted some problem areas.
I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience.
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especiallyfor the garden. It was like the ´´
I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience.
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especially
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I didn´t know how stressful moving would be until I went through that experience.
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especially for the garden. It was like the ´´Eden garden´´ because of it beauty. One day to the other they decided that they had spent long enough living there so my father announc
I was born in a large family, and we lived at the same house for more tahn 20 years. Our home was not exceptional, but for me it was. Especially for the garden. It was like the ´´Eden garden´´ because of it beauty. One day to the other they decided that they had spent long enough living there so my father announc
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