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Phuongthaohq Posted 7 years ago
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The reason that I write this article is I want to share my experience study English. As you know I am studying English major at FPT University. Everyone probably thinks that I study well English but don’t. In the first time, I get many difficulties because I don’t approach the environment at university. I can’t understand what my teacher talk. I really puzzle. And the time makes me most concern is I failed the final exam. I'm really pressured and I want to abandon. But thanks to the encouragement of parent and my friends, I have intention. I sought google to find an English book and find an English class that I can attend. Every day, After finishing the lesson in class, I went to the library to study because the library has many books that I can study. For reading and writing skill, I often buy books to improve. And with listening skill, I practice by watching many videos on Youtube. I recommend everyone follow some channels such as The Ellen show, speak English with Vannesa … I think it is very effective . Everyday everyone should study at least 10 new vocabularies. It will help you have many vocabularies that you can make use of for other skill.

  

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Here are my comments and observations: I can understand what you tried to convey. Your seems to have a large vocabulary. That said, your grammar and ability to form soild sentences still need a lot of attention.

— Anonymous

  • Here are my comments and observations: I can understand what you tried to convey.
  • Your seems to have a large vocabulary.
  • That said, your grammar and ability to form soild sentences still need a lot of attention.
  • I looked over your article and tried to point out some of the problems in highlight.
  • You have a lot of errors that it is not possible to correct every sentence without rewritting over the article.
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Here are my comments and observations: I can understand what you tried to convey. Your seems to have a large vocabulary. That said, your grammar and ability to form soild sentences still need a lot of attention. I looked over your article and tried to point out some of the problems in highlight. You have a lot of errors that it is not possible to correct every sentence wi
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Phuongthaohq

The reason that I am writing this article is (that)I want to share my experience with/in studying English. As you know, I am studying Engl

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