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B.J Posted 17 years ago
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I think goverment should do more to reduce poverty in this country.

There are not so many people who suffer from poverty. But some people are working all day , get very little money and they can do nothing but work. So they can't marry and have children. Many of them are nonpermanent employee so when economy is slow down , they will be ray off so they feel scary every day. Now there are very little job so if some one is fired, they can't get job so even permanent employee can't say anything bad about their company even though they work every day 12 hours. I think it's very serious problem in this country.
  

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I think the government should do more to reduce the poverty in this country; there are many people who live below the poverty line. Numerous people work a twelve hour day with little financial reward which affects their ability to marry and start a family. Many people are employed on a temporary basis which does not provide security, for example when the economy slows down they are laid off which makes them feel very insecure.

  • I think the government should do more to reduce the poverty in this country; there are many people who live below the poverty line.
  • Numerous people work a twelve hour day with little financial reward which affects their ability to marry and start a family.
  • Many people are employed on a temporary basis which does not provide security, for example when the economy slows down they are laid off which makes them feel very insecure.
  • The fact that unemployment is high, people are afraid of losing their jobs which makes them accept conditions of employment which are unacceptable.
  • I really think this is a very serious problem in this country.
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I think the government should do more to reduce the poverty in this country; there are many people who live below the poverty line. Numerous people work a twelve hour day with little financial reward which affects their ability to marry and start a family.

Many people are employed on a temporary basis which does not provide security, for example when the economy slows down they are laid

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