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I think goverment should do more to reduce poverty in this country.

There are not so many people who suffer from poverty. But some people are working all day , get very little money and they can do nothing but work. So they can't marry and have children. Many of them are nonpermanent employee so when economy is slow down , they will be ray off so they feel scary every day. Now there are very little job so if some one is fired, they can't get job so even permanent employee can't say anything bad about their company even though they work every day 12 hours. I think it's very serious problem in this country.