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B.J Posted 17 years ago
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Writting

Is this writting natural? Please cheaking my writting.

When I was walking on my way to school, I noticed that a woman who were riding bicykle with using her cell phone was coming.

And she and I almost hit each other. Then she gave a dirty look at me.

For some reason, I felt sorry for her.

Thaks in advance
  

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J Is this writting writing natural? Please cheaking check my writting writing . While I was walking to school, I noticed a woman approaching me on a bicycle, talking on her cell phone.

  • J Is this writting writing natural?
  • Please cheaking check my writting writing .
  • While I was walking to school, I noticed a woman approaching me on a bicycle, talking on her cell phone.
  • When she and I nearly collided, she gave me a dirty look.
  • For some reason, I felt sorry for her.
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B.JIs this writting writing natural? Please cheaking check my writting writing.
While I was walking to school, I noticed a woman approaching me on a bicycle, talking on her cell phone. When she and I nea

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