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Good2go Posted 19 years ago
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0 I would like thank you my entire team to bring me here, I think i'll be productive for this organisation. I like to request everyone to spend some time with me in order to understand organisaion structure and IT application and procedures. again thank you all of you 0-
  

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0 When posting, you should say what kind of help do you need (I assume it's with editing your introductory message). 02br 02br 00 Have you just been hired by this company? 02br 02br 00 Then you should not thank the whole group for being hired, as you've been hired very probably by the decision of your manager, not by a common decision of the group.

— Marius Hancu

  • 0 When posting, you should say what kind of help do you need (I assume it's with editing your introductory message).
  • 02br 02br 00 Have you just been hired by this company?
  • 02br 02br 00 Then you should not thank the whole group for being hired, as you've been hired very probably by the decision of your manager, not by a common decision of the group.
  • 02br 02br 00 Perhaps, instead: 02br 02br 01i 00Hello, everybody:02br 02br 00 I am glad I'll be working within your team [or: that I am a member of this/your team], and I thoroughly intend to apply myself in order to quickly become productive for this organization.
  • I would thus appreciate if each of you could spend some time with me in order to understand the structure of the organization, the IT applications and the various other procedures.
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0 When posting, you should say what kind of help do you need (I assume it's with editing your introductory message). 02br
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