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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writings and sketches

She thought while drinking her tea that if just looking at writings and sketches is this much fun, how much fun it will be to be able to read and sketch. With this she determined that she would learn reading and sketching as soon as possible. She had already made the ways to her learning.

Are these sentences correct and natural, please?

Thanks in advance.

  

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It's very formal.

  • It's very formal.
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sundarnazWith this she determined

A less formal wording would be Because of this she decided.

sundarnazShe had already made the ways to her learning.

What exactly does this mean?

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