WRITING_FRIEND

This is a descriptive paragraph about my best friend. Please read it and give any advice. Your feedback will be very precious to me. Thank you very much.

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I think that everyone has at least one best friend in life, and so do I. His name is Pat. I met him when I was in grade 3 in elementary school. We studied together through elementary school, secondary school and high school, so I guess I can say we have known each other for quite a long time. He is quite handsome, or at least to me. He has clear, white skin. He also has a good-looking face, which fancies many girls in class. His eyes are black, not souless nor lifeless. Instead they are quite attractive, beautiful like two pristine stones of onyx. I love his smile, as it is genuinely sweet and warm. When I look at his smile, I feel like being encouraged, like he is willing to understand and help me get over any difficulties. And that wonderful smile is a good portray of his personalities. He is warm, energetic, optimistic, and always cares for other people, especially the ones who are close to him. He makes me feel secured when he is around because he is truly reliable. At first glance, you will probably think that the cheerful, shining look never disappears from his face, but that’s not true. He can be strong, he can be optimistic and rarely cries. However, I am one of the few people who once saw and was beside him in his weakest moment. Even strong people sometimes have to rely on others, who are special and close enough to them, which is the scene ordinary people won’t be able to see. Although we have gone separate ways now, we still keep in touch and help each other a lot. He is one of the best friends I have ever had.