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Vanderkiller Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing task1 : pie chart

the chart show the numbe of visitor to a local cinema according to age in 200


The chart comparisons data between each of ages watched a multiplex cinema in 2000

Turning to the pie chart , the ages 55 and older spent time a large proportion to visit the local cinema . It made up nearly a half of pie . A tiny slide accounted for about 5 percent which the ages watch cinema is fewest . Like the tiny segment a mere 8 percent of age from 21 to 30 visited the local cinema . The teenager watched 3-times as many as a smallest slide . The ages from 10 to 20 had 36 percent of number of visitor and the ages 10-20 was larger than teenager .


This is first time I 've writen task1

  

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