Writing task 2Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the course of this? What possible solution can you suggest?

It is argued that a lot of offenders return to their crime path straight after getting out of jail. This essay will discuss the course and how to solve this issue.

There is a predominant reason which these criminals commit misconduct is that they do not have enough knowledge and skills to survive in society after a long time living in prison. Besides, many employers of businesses do not recruit these people because those consider that they are unreliable to give the chance. As a result, they become unemployed, which means that they have not enough money to pay day-to-day expenses, leading to no alternative but to continue with wrongdoings. This is because they may be thought that only this way can help them make money for their lives.

Nevertheless, this problem is not in no way solved. The main solution for this is that they need financial support from the government, which can help them pay temporarily for their basic daily necessities. In addition, they should also be facilitated to take part in vocational trainings. By this way, they have the opportunity to be learned and practice skills to improve their ability. If this is the case, they are likely to be admitted to a company that will lead to a brighter future for them. In fact, there are many countries in the world including Vietnam have done a similar way to help these ex-offenders to come back to the community.

In conclusion, it is true that many offenders return the wrong way after releasing from the prison due to their bad knowledge, but I believe that this problem will be address if government places more emphasis on supporting them to help them return to society.