Writing task 2 The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The first picture illustrates the park in its opening in 1920 and the second one describes the public park after the development these days.
Overall, it is clear that Grange Park experienced several changes in terms of facilities and infrastructure. Besides, the plans were the emergence of water features and the disappearance of the fountain.
In 1920, the park was built two entrances in which are located in Arnold and Eldon Street near the stages for musicians. In the middle of the picture, the fountain was constructed. There were lots of seats and a rose garden around the surrounding. Pond for water plants was erected in the Northeast.
In recent years, the fountain is demolished to the replacement of the rose garden together with four seats on both four sides. Amphitheatre for concerts appears to replace the stage for musicians. There is the appearance of a cafe in the north. Seats in the west are destroyed to make the pave for the entrance underground car park. In addition, a pond for water plants and a glasshouse are changed by the water feature for entertainment purposes.
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