Writing task 2. Please help me to check it.

These days, natural resources are disappearing quickly throughout the world, particularly to fossil fuels. I completely agree with the statement that international society must act to make sure that all countries decline their consumption of fossil fuels like gas and oil.

In fact, there are a lot of benefits for people with this act. First, these thing will be the primary factor to encourage people, especially with scientists, invent many replace energies such as nuclear energy, wind energy. Moreover, because of new energy, they bring to us a huge amount of benefits about power, convenient and price. Second, this act will help people with healthy by reducing a lot of emission from fossil fuels like carbon monoxide. Furthermore, by doing this act, a big amount of respiratory patients will be decreased gradually because of lack of fossil fuels's emission in the air.

In addition, the environment will be better with this decision. If there are a few emissions, the habitat will get better in the air, soil and water. Actually, fresh air, water and soil are the most necessary things for trees and animals progress. Moreover, the climate is one of the primary factor which effects directly to this progress and is also affected by emissions. For example, because of lack of emissions from consumption of fossil fuels, species in Amazon rain forest, which is located in South America grow quickly and strongly.

In conclusion, although fossil fuels are necessary for our life, the consequences from consumption are really awful with not only people but also the environment. Therefore, the act should be done as soon as possible to ensure that all countries decrease their fossil fuels usage.