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Topic: There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.

What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

Nowadays, It is a common belief that artificial activities are responsible for global warming all over the world. Personally, I totally agree with this opinion. In this essay, i will look at the reasons for this issue and propose some solutions.

One of the main cause of the problems is that deforestation is at the alarming rate. Green trees and forests play the key role as a green lung of the Earth. However, the human beings cut down trees more and more in order to meet the demand of the growth of agricultural production and destroy vast areas of land and rain forests in search of fossil fuel, moreover, oil spills damage the coastline as well. As the results, people face up with an increasing problem of pollution and natural disaster such as earthquakes, flash flood, heatwaves, ice melting, erosion and so on. The way forward might be to preserve remaining forests and recover the lost forests, which demand efforts from people as many as possible.

Another problem is the expansion of industrial areas. It means that there are more factories in the world, in particular the heavy industry which result in poor air quality. Not only atmosphere, factories empty toxic water into rivers and oceans. They make a negative contribution on ozone layer depletion. To tackle this issue, governments should encourage residents to use more environmentally friendly products. Regarding companies, it is necessary to establish a strict law which force them to carry out a environmental project or install an equipment to deal with chemical waste before releasing into the environment. That can partly lower pollution levels.

To sum up, people's reaction to the environment worsen climate changes over the world, due to industrial activities and deforestation as well. Action must be taken urgently, otherwise, our community will suffer from serious disasters in the future. My view is that the main responsibility solving the problem lies with government as well as citizens.