Writing task 2 (please check this for me, thank you).

Topic: Nowadays, celebrities are famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad effect for young people.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On these days, famous people tend to be attractive mostly for their richness or their appealing apearances. From my perspective, I believe it is true that this present condition can do harm to the young people's growth.

One of the most noticeable reasons that causes young adults to follow the trnd that is they are still immature and inexperienced. They are in youth so they do not know much about the actual world. These people only see the frontal display and do not consider the consequence behind it. For example, if a well-known superstar shows off his or her newest outfit, the teenagers will try to catch up this brand new style blindly without noticing the expensiveness or the impractical aspect of the outfit. As a result, a large ammount of money will be spent uselessly by the teens on these decorations.

On the other hand, there is still some advantage of the current situation. Seeing the celebrities' affluence or charm may cause a great influence to the youngsters' mind. They might be motivated, thus, they try to work hard to develop their own life for the reason of being like their idols. However, the target that these adolescents are aiming to is not always the accurately possimistic one which can be the idol's achievement, accomplishment or contribution. Therefore, these young people are likely to choose the wrong path more than the right one

To sum up, while famous people can somehow have enthusiastic effects to the youth, i believe that young adults nowadays are more easily affected by the celebrities gorgeous outlook and abundance of property in the bad way