Writing task 2: please check it for me!

Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, there is an increasing concern about maternal and parental behaviors. As a result, some people believe that it is vital for all parents to take part in parenting courses. In my opinion, it is unnecessary, time-wasting and less economical solution for many married couples.

First and obviously, it depends on parents' financial status and time schedule to decide to join in the kind of course. These courses requires a great deal of money to pay for trainers and facilities and a plenty of time of both academic and practicing classes. While some parents have available time and good economic capability, others suffer from hard-working days during their pregnancy or even just before their infancy to prepare for their offspring, especially the manual labor and single mom whose financial burden will be worsen because of the course of parenting.

Secondly, mothers and fathers can easily take advantage of the development of the Internet. The Internet is a great source of information for all people including parents, it supplies various knowledge such as naming, feeding, taking shower and music for the infants' brain developments on Youtube or Google. Parents having newborn babies are also able to follow some groups of like-minded people on social media like Facebook to share and be given some pieces of advice for the problem you have by the professional and the experienced. This solution is easy, time-saving, and affordable with only a laptop or a mobile phone with wireless networks at home and public wifi hotpots, people can be connected whenever and wherever they are.

All things considered, thanks to the advancement of the Internet technology, parents are totally able to give their babies the best treatment without paid courses.