WRITING TASK 2- languages

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Topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do agree or disagree with this opinion?

My essay
Throughout history, several languages have disappeared , some of them have not been used anymore. In some communities’ opinion, the decreased diversity of languages is not significant because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the Earth. However, this opinion is not completely reasonable.

First, people will understand together easily if the world only has some popular languages. It will be easy to communicate and everything will be completed without any obstacle. For instance, an international company will develop substantially if everyone in that field speaks one language. Therefore, they deal with the problems faster. In addition, the principles of each country will comprehend easier and better if they speak the same language without translation. As a result, the relationship of every country in the world will be better and be enhanced.

On the other hand, it is also irrelevant if some languages in the world continue to disappear. Each language expresses characteristic culture. Thanks to languages, scientists can discover the humanism of each community. In particular, the literature development include the diversity of idiom, synonym and vocabulary which depend on language development. Furthermore, different languages has different sources or starting point. Consequently, the fewer languages in the world, the more reduced language diversity and culture variety.

In conclusion, although there are advantages if everybody in the world speaks only some popular languages, I believe that the world will lose a lot of values about characteristic culture and the beauty of some languages.