Writing task 2 ielts: give your opinion

Title ( source: from Cambridge 15):

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Here is my essay ( I try to learn more words about advertising and write in my own style )

As far as we know, advertisement nowadays has been a crucial part of the world of marketing. We can see its widespread through social network platforms with a significant increase. I would argue that advertising has succeeded to persuade us to buy items. However, advertising is so prevalent that people pay less attention to it.

One of strong evidence to say that advertisements successfully attract buyers with plenty of persuasions because it seemingly hypnotizes people to spend money on shopping. By designing lots of tactics like giving sales on special occasions or hiring many famous artists as their representatives that impact on customers more easily and make productive selling. Moreover, some companies make strategies to advertise new products by brainwashing people that if they use their products, they will see many instant effects. For instance, giving a sale with a discount of 50% due to Valentine's day and making sure safety and quality can make lots of beauty products sold out in just one day.

Nevertheless, there is another point of view that people buy less attention to advertisements. Because they don’t have the demand for buying. A conducted survey shows that most people really get annoyed when they have to wait for so much advertising videos if they want to watch their films. Furthermore, lots of advertising are so repetitive and not creative.

In conclusion, people still tend to buy items by sometimes noticing advertising. In my view, with the outbreak of social media such as Facebook, Youtube,...advertising will attach to them more closely.