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Ngocquyet0510 Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing task 2 IELTS

Learning about the past is believed useless in the present by many people. However, I think that this way of thinking is wrong and in this essay I will explain why.

Firstly, learning anything is useful. We have to learn plenty of subjects in schools or even as little as what is a balanced diet are because this knowledge will one day help us in our life. For example, if a bright student has good marks at school, but he doesn’t have any experience about life at all, then after graduating, he will be fooled or even cannot find a job. Therefore, learning about the past is the same and it can help us to have experience to become wiser in life.

Secondly, learning from the past can also mean learning about our history. History teaches us what happened in the past and in my opinion, it is realistic. For example, in my country Vietnam, we have a long and heroic history fighting against invaders. Probably the most popular war is the Vietnam War. And by learning this information, I feel very proud of being a Vietnamese and I think that learning about the past have lots of advantages and people who denied its advantages will face major problem in lifes.

In conclusion, learning about the past is beneficial anf it can help us to become a better person in our life as well as avoid being fooled by people, which can cost a lot of money and strength to recover the loss.

  

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Welcome to the forum.

Please post your essays in the essay forum. I've moved this one for you.

Good luck.

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What is the topic? Please include the instructions with your essay. Otherwise, we cannot assess one of the four scoring criteria "Task completion."

Your essay is barely meets the word count requirement. To be safe, you should add another sentence.



Learning about the past is believed useless in the present by many people. However, I think that this way of thinking is wro

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Here's a small comment about your first sentence.

Instead of

Learning about the past is believed useless in the present by many people

say

many people believe that learning about the past is useless in the present.


Active voice makes your sentence more dynamic.

Clive

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