Writing task 2 family history please review my essay

Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations rather than the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For some people studying the genealogy of their family is a worthwhile investment, whilst others assert that current and future generation deserve more attention. From my perspective, it is more beneficial for people to focus more on the present and future.

To begin with, by studying genealogy, people can be aware of any hereditary medical conditions. Admittedly, family members inherit their ancestor’s genes and lifestyle choices, and these factors can provide information about health issues that might run in the family. Hence, knowing the health problems that ancestors dealt with help us to determine whether we are at potential risk of developing a particular medical condition, thus, allowing us to prevent it at an early stage. For example, recent research concluded that in 2018 more than 80% of Vietnamese people who had genetic diseases had been cured because of the information that patients’ family medical history provides.

However, some people argue that instead of investing time and energy to trace family roots back in time, it is better to focus solely on the present and future. Granted, focusing on improving our present lives such as through providing health and education lead to the better standard of living of both present and future generation. For instance, parents tend to save up money for their children to attend universities. Although there is no guarantee that their offspring can reach that level of education, parents still believe it is an essential investment. Indeed, many successful people born in impoverished families have turned back to support their parents after graduating from universities.

In conclusion, I believe that people should place more emphasis on the present and future generation. However, the importance of genealogy should not be undervalued as it helps us to reduce potential health risks