WRITING TASK 2

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Some people believe that children learn better when they are placed in classes with children of similar academic abilities. Others believe that children learn better when they are in classes with children representing a diverse range of academic abilities.

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While some people think that children had better learn in classes with children of similar academic abilities, others say that their children learn better when they are placed in classes with children having a different range of academic abilities. In my views, I believe that it is much better to take children going to the classes with children of the same academic abilities.


Some parents want their children taking part in a class with classmates of similar talent or skills. According to this point of view, students have no worries at all about competing with others or not keep up with others. It can be seen that nowadays students are stress and anxious because of their friends who are thought that to be more intelligent and skillful. So, if children are placed in classes with similar academic abilities, teachers can know their capacities and teach with a suitable speed and levels.

Other people, on the other hand, want their children learn in classes with children representing a diverse range of academic abilities. A while classes with the same children's abilities require school assessing the students carefully to put them to suitable classes, others does not. This means it is easier for school to enroll students. Another reason is that when children have a diverse range of abilities, they may help each other and try to be better by themselves.

In my opinion, it is better to learn in classes with classmates representing the same range of abilities. For one thing, it is both easier for school and children to learn. For example, teachers does not need pay full attention to each student that they are concentrate or not. And students also do not worried about studying is backward.

In short, it is possible to learn in classes with children representing diverse abilities. However, to reduce stress for teachers and students, it is better to learn with classmates having the same abilities. /data/user/0/com.samsung.android.app.notes/files/clipdata/clipdata_200404_005914_977.sdoc->