Writing task 2

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Some people do not go directly to college but travel or work for a short time . Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

It is a popular trend that several students have taking a nap after completing the curriculum in high school . While this issue is burdensome to extent , it would do more good than harm .

On the one hand, there are certain reasons supporting attending the university immediately . It is very easy to forget awareness after a long time without using books . The knowledge is step by step, and school leavers could not remember foundation things to build a higher education after a year gap . Therefore , they might not have motivate enough to go to the university and take novel academic knowledges . Moreover, after a relaxing time, it is difficult to continue following the study in the university . While working could directly gain finance for youngster’s families , they would feel learning is turned to be a waste of time and money . Gradually , they like earning money than studying , and start working instead of learning.

On the other hand, Taking time off before going to the college to travel or work has a number of benefits . Firstly , traveling to the remote tourist attraction might enhance youngster’s knowledge of people from ethnic groups and different customs one of which is language . For instance , young children in Viet Nam could participate in tour to UK , this might help them to have more opportunities practicing speak foreign language , therefore speaking skill can innovate , that is necessary in the trend of modern globalization. Secondly , attempting to work may distribute students a deeper understanding about career they want to pursue in their job future . For example, a learner enjoy doing as the manager in the restaurant . And experiencing with serving clients in period time before going on studying supply essential skills such as dealing with customer , that reinforce them better in the work market .

In conclusion, taking off time before entering the higher education have advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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