Writing task 2

hi everyone, i'm a new member of this group also a new writing-learner. this is my essay, hoping to get a lot of precious comments from you. Thanks a lot.

question: a lot of people are trying to look youger, what are the reasons, is it a positive or negative development?

In any historical periods of time, beauty has been being an indispensable aspect of human life all over the world, regardless of any religions, and trying to look younger seems to be not an unprecedented trend for a lot of people. Although there are some limitations of this trend, a myriad of reasons and benefits can be easily mentioned as a cause and results of it.

A lot of reasons making younger appearance becomes a necessary factor. By getting younger, especially for woman, they will be more attractive which is help them gain a lot of attention and support. For example,we all know a fact that if a good-looking preson appears at a party, people around tend to pay attention on her and try to make a conversation. In addition, A bright external show brings not only attention but also confidence taking a big step for them to their success. Some people often hesitates and feels shy when they are talking in front of crowd, due to worrying about their appearance, but this fear will be blown away if they know that they are in a good situations thanks to their trying.

with a youger - looking appearance, people easily perceive a lot of positive changes in their life. First, by acquiring more beauty and confidence, a number of people can get bigger happiness in their house with their partner, which is a necessity for them. Feeling upset about the partner’s appearance is a main reason ,besides, lacking of comprehension between husband and wife, that makes their relationship becomes worst, but this situation will be limited with trying to look younger. As we discuss before, if a person looks younger, it will bring not only happiness but also success and fame which they could use to do some grateful actions. Emma Watson, for instance, being a prominent actress with her bright beauty and intelligence, is currently a goodwill ambassador for United Nations, undoubtedly draw a great deal of attention and promoting gender equality.

In conclusion, trying to look younger seems to bring a myriad of positive benefits than the negative one, we should encourage this trend and it cannot be taken lightly.