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Thái Võ Quốc Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Writing task 2

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

My essay

Acception the equality of numbers between male and famale pupils in every subject is vital. In my own perspective, I think that this view should be applied in unversities but I have some agreements and disagreements for this view.

On the one hand, equation in every branch subjects helps people reduce prejudice about the descrimination sex. It also gives opportunities to prove the abilities of girl. Let take an obviously typical example, in science, in the past, almost everybody have a conservative idea that women is not intelligent enough to build scientific achievements. So, they don't have any chance to contribute to knowledge in human race. Moreover, If the girl was limited in old branch which was approriate in the previous time, we would not meet their real talents.

On the other hand, I think arrangement male and female alumnus in the universities equally will create more undesirable problems. In some dangerous branch subjects which is adequate for man, if adding girls to these branch, it would be so terrible. An another clearly and different example is, in mechanical branchs, some equiments really are too heavy to bring by a girl, even these devices could hurt them and happen unwanted accidents. Additionally, for these problems mentioned, the girls met these, which make a boringness for their choices, leading to lose their future carrer.

In conclusion, I suppose universities should have many consideration when allowing the female to study. People should aware the most suitable subject for yourselves and find information carefully prior to enrolling.


 
  

Top answer

Acception (wrong form) the equality of numbers (wrong expression) between male and famale pupils (wrong word) in every subject is vital. In my own perspective, I think that this view should be applied in unversities but I have some agreements and disagreements for this view. You need to answer the question: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  • Acception (wrong form) the equality of numbers (wrong expression) between male and famale pupils (wrong word) in every subject is vital.
  • In my own perspective, I think that this view should be applied in unversities but I have some agreements and disagreements for this view.
  • You need to answer the question: To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  • To answer this kind of question, you must use an adverbs of extent.
  • Examples are: totally, completely, somewhat, partially, not at all, and partly.
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Acception (wrong form) the equality of numbers (wrong expression) between male and famale pupils (wrong word) in every subject is vital. In my own perspective, I think that this

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