Writing task 2

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In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with the academic subjects. Discuss the effects of this trend.

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We all know that both of physical trainings and academic subjects are crucial in education. In fact, physical educations are removed from school schedule and replaced by other subjects such as learning English or soft skills in a lot of countries. Consequently, it ignites a public debate.

Because of the benefits bringing from physical education, some people said that there is unreasonable to keep students from training their health. In present society, students are addicted to the Internet or don not have places near their houses to play sports, they have no chance of workout or playing sports. That will cause many mentally and physically serious problems like overweight or undermining health. Thus, it is necessary to maintain physical training in education systems. Yet every cloud has a silver lining.

Due to the fact that in our modern life, most of academic careers do not require physical health. Knowing that, instead of consuming time and energy in physical classes, schools and universities in many countries has made some changes in education. Physical education has been replaced by others subjects which could help children in work in the future. In undeveloped countries, they usually are English lessons because English is a global language. If students were able to speak fluent English, read and write reports in English, they could be easier to find a job and develop themselves in the future.

In conclusion, there are high hopes that educators could cooperate with parents in finding a proper way to balance physical health and study.