Writing Task 2

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Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the privative lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled over even stop. Discuss both views.

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Nowadays, we can notice that everything celebrities do making headlines. What do they do or say, media will write stories about them on magazines, newspapers or on the internet. Media does that because these topics always audiences. They usually do that with the purpose to take commercial advantages from our desires. However, every cloud has a silver lining, everything has two sides of it.

Knowing celebrities has flaws will satisfy some peculiar pleasures of people. Famous people also do have some parts of their private lifes which they want to make a shield to hide or protect. Just because of financial demands, media does not have the right to break their privacy and publish all of things about them. The government must control these problems to make sure that everyone has a completely right to privacy.

On the flip side, there is a bond between celebrities and media. A person could be well-known when the information about them had published by the media. In the initial stage, they would be put on the hall of fame by the positive news. However, the negative news always beside the positive ones that celebrities could not control.

To conclude, as long as our curiosities about the mistakes of celebrities are still remained, media will continuous publish them. We should give up this desire and give a hand to protect the privacy of human. Besides, I think government must control these problems and make sure that everyone has a completely right to privacy.