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Mira Nguyen 688 Posted 8 years ago
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Writing task 2

More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.

Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh drawback?

These day, There are a number of children are allowed to move to other countries to study. I really agree that the possitive of studying abroad more than the negative.

It is clear that there is an increasing of the student at prestigious universities. This is because most of them, the best unversities employ lectures who are experts in thier fields. Adding an international element to student's education background and the qualification gained abroad will be open doors to better job opportunities for thier after they graduate. In addition, the living and studying in a foriegn country can abroaden student's horizens about the general intends which are occuring in the global, such as economic, technology, polities, culture and society. Oversea students have a lot of chances are exposed to different culture and customs of varity nations in the word. More important, the students who are living and studying abroad can immerse themselve a language then others at home.

At the side of the great benifits of the studying broad, the living away from home to travel abroad to study of students can be challenging in thier life. They would not be recieved the care of thier parent and relatives. They have to pay for thier basic necessities, such as accommodation, bills and food. Furthermore, the language barier could be cause difficulties for younger peoples when they come to other citizens to study. However, they would be overcome all these difficullties over time.

In conclusion, The studying in a foriegn countries give student a alot of advantages than disadvantages.

  

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