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Tiare Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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I agree with this statement. Who has a teaching vocation is someone who feels the need to contribute to social improvement, who has patience, understanding, dedication and above all seeks a change in youth and later in the world. A teacher without vocation brings with it many consequences which affect both the students and the teacher. Since it is not possible to have a harmonious, peaceful environment and a good student-teacher relationship is not created. This brings many difficulties later for the student's learning or for the teacher's work. In extreme cases there may be abuse of the student directly and indirectly. This can happen inside the classroom or outside.

In the last sentence of the statement where it says "It is a call from beyond oneself to use one’s strengths to make the world a better place even if that means working for free sometimes." I think he is very right, since I remember when I was in high school and I had a math teacher who always offered to help us, my classmates and me. Most of them found mathematics difficult so when we had a test we would tell the teacher if he could give us a reinforcement of the unit and he agreed without problem. Even when we were with my classmates in 4th grade, the math teacher dedicated an afternoon of study to us at school to help us with the PSU exercises. Perhaps that time he had designated for other things, however, he decided to occupy it in teaching his students.

  

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Your essay does not have an academic argumentative essay structure.
If it is being marked according to that standard (IELTS, TOEFL and others), it will get a poor score.


I cannot comment on the essay structure, so I will only comment of the grammar of the individual sentences.

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