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0Hello, I'm Chiara. I know my writing English is quite bad, because I'm not used to write at all. I was wondering if somebody could correct my writing task from time to time.02br
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00Here it goes:02br
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00Dear Sir,02br
00I'm a student at college in Fordham.02br
00My friends and I are writing to you about your article published in your newspaper few weeks ago,02br
00about Fordham town council's proposal to build a large car park where now Greendale Park is.02br
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00Our college is right in front of the park, so we can see people going there everyday, that's why we decided to make a small survey among Fordham's residents to know wether they would agree or not with the council's proposal.02br
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00Emerging from the survey almost the 80% of the residents go often to the park, while only the 22% never goes.02br
00Among this 80% of people, more then the half of them goes there at least once a week, while 26% goes daily.02br
00The reasons they go, are the most various and different, but all seem to appreciate and enjoy having a green place in their sourrounding, either to have a break during the lunchtime, either to bring their grandchildren to the playground, or to go ad play tennis in the park's tenniscourts.02br
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00Seeing the survey's results, we ask Fordham town ouncil to keep Greendale Park in its place and find a better solution for the building of the car park which could be built, as the same residents suggested, either underground either knocking down the empty factory near the river.02br
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00We hope Fordham's residents request will be listened by the town council.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
00students from Fordham's college.02br
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00Thanks for all the you can do,02br
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00Chiara0-