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Queenee Posted 9 years ago
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Writing task 1: The diagram below...

The bar chart indicates data on the money that British women spent on traveling in two group of countries in 2002.

At first glance it is clear that traveling abroad is more selected and British housewife have to pay more for sure.

Overall, the money they have to pay for traveling abroad remained relatively constant for all age groups. Although all the groups spent more money on holiday abroad but 50-64 age group spent the most just over £750. In contrast, the 75 and over age group spent less than £250. The age group 30-49 was the second group which spent lots of money on traveling approximately £700. Under 30 and 65-74 age group are nearly equal.

Compared to holiday abroad, the money for domestic tourism is less than, all under £250. The 65-74 age group spent nearly a quater whereas under 30 age group spend just approximately one tenth. For all the remaining groups are relatively remain (~ £150).

  

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QueeneeThe bar chart

Please upload the image. It is hard to evaluate your writing without it.

I am fairly certain that these two phrases are inaccurate and do not represent what is in the bar chart.

British women
British housewife
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The bar chart indicates data on the money that British women (Incorrect word) spent on traveling in two group of countries (That is not a correct description of what the chart shows) in 2002.

At first glance it is clear that (unnecessary) traveling abroad

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